monechri2b
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#1 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 00:05
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Hi, as you may have recognized, I began posting my first TG comic at my blog!
I want you to comment at the acts and tell me what you find improvable.
The comic will have a lot more than 100 pages and I already finished 5 Acts right now.
I will post here, when I published a new act. Stay tuned.
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monechri2b
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#2 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 00:06
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Hi, I wanted to mention, that I began posting my first (rendered) comic. Read the latest 2 updates to get to know more.
Please tell me what you think of the introduction:
Please also comment.
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monechri2b
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#3 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 00:07
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I will dayly update and post a new act. Please tell me what you think of the introduction and acts of the comic.
Poll for Act 1
Please comment.
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Johanna M
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#4 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 02:21
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I do have some small issues, first, Graphics and story is OK, but...
I'm not from an English speaking contry either, but spelling is important so my tip is to write the dialog in Word and do a spellcheck in english AND let someone else check it for language problems.
Two, keep the text within the bubbles or in the white frame at all cost...
Otherwise its a great effort, we need every new creator we can get in this small community :)
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monechri2b
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#5 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 11:06
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I did this in act 3,4,5.
I am going to link all done acts on my site now.
Those who want to help me correct them are invited to do so.
Click here, if you want to correct something.
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Mr Ram
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#6 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 13:36
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Will you provide a link to your Comic?
Mr. Ram
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Aardvark
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#7 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 17:33
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Not bad as a start to 3d. I noticed that the text wasn't inside the balloons in the small version but was inside the balloons in the full screen version, so you may want to look at that.
I liked the special effects in the spaceship, and some of the shots were imaginative.
It looked a little bit odd that the characters had their mouths' closed all the time when they were speaking. If you can, too, please use shadows; it makes it much more realistic.
Overall, nice first effort at this.
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tsjamiedward
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#8 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 17:34
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These are exactly the kind of comics I love. Thank you soooo much. I went on and tuned up some of the grammer for you. I love it, love it, love it.
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tsjamiedward
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#9 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 17:35
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I would really like to know how you used that software to create your comic. I have an idea from an old story I think would go great in this medium.
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monechri2b
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#10 | Posted: 30 Oct 2009 08:14 | Edited by: monechri2b
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1. Well wow. I am really proud of you all. I thrusted you and you did not abuse this to delete the comics or write them empty.
2. The software is to easy to add shadows or something like this. Sorry.
- The mouth, well I think I can do somthing with that.
3. I am very happy to get your help. Thank you very much and keep doing in the next comics.
4. I am also very happy that there are people who love them.
5. tsjamiedward
Well it is just taking snapshots of created scenes and then uploading them into a presentation at g.docs.
Then add a few text fields and bubbles and wirte the story you've thougt of.
But!, you have to do some things to make it legal. First of all it is neccesary to buy the software and no illegal way! Second, you have to backlink the community. And third place a copyright mark by the community(giong to do this).
6. I am going to release all written comics today (GMT+1)
7. Mr. Ram, what do you think of clicking at the ''here'' in my first post? It should be there. Otherwise, here it is: http://tgcaptionseries.blogspot.com/
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monechri2b
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#11 | Posted: 30 Oct 2009 09:50
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To point 6: I did so.
Please vote, comment, and if you want to, you may also correct something.
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monechri2b
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#12 | Posted: 30 Oct 2009 11:07 | Edited by: monechri2b
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I released the rest WE created upto now. It is still aviable for corrections.
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monechri2b
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#13 | Posted: 30 Oct 2009 11:08
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monechri2b
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#14 | Posted: 30 Oct 2009 11:09 | Edited by: monechri2b
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Act 6 is ready to correct.
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monechri2b
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#15 | Posted: 1 Nov 2009 14:28 | Edited by: monechri2b
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After this thread was loced (reason unknown), femur unlocked it again.
So here I am back with the poll to Act 6.
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nekollx
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#16 | Posted: 1 Nov 2009 15:09
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i looked at it and most of the comcis are just copy, no picture, serveral acts in fact...its kinda oddd
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GreatSage
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#17 | Posted: 1 Nov 2009 17:21
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I noticed the same but if you wait for a while the pictures appear, I was not very happy with what happened to Lara in this episode - I hope this is corrected in later episodes
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tgfan92
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#18 | Posted: 1 Nov 2009 18:49
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I would vote on chapter 6, but in all honesty did not care for it, and it has nothing to do with the quality as much as the story, so it wouldn't really be fair.
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monechri2b
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#19 | Posted: 2 Nov 2009 08:20
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So most of you don't really like act 6. You have to know, that the program has only a few given poses.
I am working at thiss problem right now. I hope you won't be disappointed with what I planned for act 7.
It's not going to be a big family meeting if you were afraid of that.
I don't know when I find time to create this episode, because school is hard. But I think I am going to create it this week.
Hope you can wait.
Stay tuned.
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GreatSage
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#20 | Posted: 2 Nov 2009 11:11
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I don't want you to feel discouraged - I for one definitely want to see what happens next - I don't know why others did not care to vote for Chapter 6 - I know why one person voted the way they did :)
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pyromaniac4312
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#21 | Posted: 4 Nov 2009 15:32
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the beginning is broken
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monechri2b
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#22 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 11:20 | Edited by: monechri2b
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I see what you mean with broken, I am going to try to fix this.
But I only saved the orginal and not the reedited version, so bad language-sorry.
Act 7 is ready for editing now. I am going to release it tomorrow.
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tgfan92
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#23 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 11:57
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Act 7 was...different...
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monechri2b
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#24 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 13:29
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Different in a good or in a bad way, please vote.
I released it earlier than planned.
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GreatSage
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#25 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 15:08
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I refuse to vote on the 'comic' until such time as you fix the problem with viewing images, going by the text I have serious issues with it but I shall refrain from saying more until I can read a complete version of this chapter.
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tgfan92
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#26 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 15:20
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I don't want to discourage Monechri2b, because I'm sure he worked hard on this, but I don't think I even understand what happened in the Act.
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GreatSage
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#27 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 17:20 | Edited by: GreatSage
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Well I don't want to discourage you either but that was not very good - I understood what was going on but it was a bit unbelievable, you have ruined any chance of the reader liking Lola - a more self centred wicked bitch there has never been, I want to see where this goes but right now I am not a fan of that 'person'.
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monechri2b
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#28 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 22:50
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Again, I did ****. I am sure, that I can rescue the story, but this can't happen without help. I would be very happy if someone corrrects the spelling stuff.
This Act was made to finite the stuff with the getting pregnant. My original planned story was a bit other, but
some didn't like act 6, so I decidet to get rid of this theme as fast as I could.
The next acts will be about continuing life.
To Lola: Well, it was kind of a plan, that you don't like her very much. Her vehaviour has a reason.(You even may know him from other TG stories)
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tgfan92
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#29 | Posted: 5 Nov 2009 23:02
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Wow, GS, that wasn't discouraging at all. =D
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GreatSage
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#30 | Posted: 6 Nov 2009 08:00
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Yeah - I'm sorry monechri2b, I didn't mean to be so harsh - I hope that you understand I was merely giving my straight forward opinion, sorry if it hurt your feelings.
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