tgfan92
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#1 | Posted: 19 Oct 2009 22:03 | Edited by: tgfan92
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I have been writing stories for years now, and have never really done anything with them. Recently after becoming a member of TGcomics, I decided to share one with you guys. It is the first one anyone besides myself has read, and since I am not by any means a TG writer so this kind of story is a first for me. I gave it to another member who ok'd it so maybe others will like it as well. Due to spacing issues, I will simply post a link for you to check out if you are interested.
Part 1
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Very-First-Pa rt-140606175
and Part 2
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/The-second-pa rt-140697478
I apologize to anyone in advance that does not like non-comic stories, or long ones. It may not be a novel, but it ended up long than I would have liked. I will post more parts as I go along.
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bolivartech
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#2 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 01:30
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I enjoy a good story instead of just a comic from time to time. I like where you're going with this, really a unique storyline.
Actually seeing this post has made me think of another I had read on deviant but cannot find. The premise was a deck of cards that allowed the winner to switch a trait with another player. Anyone have any idea of what that one was.
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GreatSage
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#3 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 16:38
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I know what you mean - I saw it elsewhere - I can't remember who wrote it though, I will try and find it
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commotion22
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#4 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 16:59 | Edited by: commotion22
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Good Start! The story doesn't give away the plot in the first few paragraphs like some sort of reverse villain reveal where the bad guy explains the whole scheme to the captive good guy. Some TGTF stories rush to explain what is happening too soon and don't let the drama and suspense build. I like it better the way you're handling it!
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tgfan92
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#5 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 17:02
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Thanks guys. Not sure why my story would remind you of a card game story, but as long as its any good I'll take it as a compliment. =D
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tgfan92
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#6 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 19:07
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In case anyone who like part one and two but didn't know part three was out, it is. I am afraid it was a tad long, so I had to cut it into two parts.
Part a
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-3a-14085 5790
and part b
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-3b-14085 6154
This has been put up roughly the same time, but I didn't want to advertise to much at once. Hope you enjoy.
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mignon
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#7 | Posted: 20 Oct 2009 19:36
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This is fun! I hope you keep us up to date on future posts! :)
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bolivartech
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#8 | Posted: 22 Oct 2009 00:23
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Only reminded me of it because of where you have it posted. I like the new chapter!
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tgfan92
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#9 | Posted: 22 Oct 2009 23:32 | Edited by: tgfan92
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For anyone out there that's still reading and awaiting the next part, and there seems to be a lot of you (or way more than I expected) should I submit more in each part or keep them at the average size they are, excluding the very last one?
On a side note, I see that some of you have noticed part four is up and running. You guys read the version that was not proof read, though it might still have some tiny errors. Sorry, I'm not really good at grading my own work. So here is a link for those who are still waiting.
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/The-fourth-pa rt-141162937
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tgfan92
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#10 | Posted: 23 Oct 2009 10:23
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If you guys see any problems with the story, or just don't understand something, feel free to drop me a line on DA, on this thread, or even PM.
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GreatSage
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#11 | Posted: 23 Oct 2009 10:59
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I like how active this forum has become for budding authors - some really interesting stories here.
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tgfan92
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#12 | Posted: 23 Oct 2009 22:38
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Part five is up and running.
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-five-141 217297
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tgfan92
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#13 | Posted: 26 Oct 2009 12:56
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Wow, it has been 3 whole days without an update. Hope you guys didn't go crazy waiting. Lol. j/k. However I do have good news for anyone that actually is still following along. Part 6 is now up on DA.
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-six-1415 38421
Again, if you have any questions or comments about the story so far, please feel free to let me know.
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GreatSage
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#14 | Posted: 26 Oct 2009 14:02
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Exciting things - no spoilers but I loved the bit when the Demon Army were thwarted by the Cute bunny.
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GreatSage
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#15 | Posted: 26 Oct 2009 15:41 | Edited by: GreatSage
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bolivartech: The premise was a deck of cards that allowed the winner to switch a trait with another player. Anyone have any idea of what that one was.
The Great sage has come through for you - Oh Lucky Forum User :)
Here is the link to the Gallery - you are Looking for the story Cards.
http://sifodyasjr.deviantart.com/gallery/
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tgfan92
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#16 | Posted: 27 Oct 2009 13:24
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Time for two more updates. Parts 7 and 8 have been posted on DA. 7 is about average size but 8 is a tad longer since I didn't know a good place to cut it in half. Some deep dark secrets revealed, and even more to come.
Part 7
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-seven-14 1644220
and Part 8
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/art/Part-eight-14 1644357
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tgfan92
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#17 | Posted: 27 Oct 2009 20:16 | Edited by: tgfan92
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Great news. I have officially finished writing the story. For all of you still reading, if any, that think I need to post the stories at a faster pace, I now can. Feel free to read at you leisure, and I will provide links when I make them.
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tgfan92
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#18 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 13:07 | Edited by: tgfan92
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Luckily one reader was kind enough to give criticism, and pointed out that the editing on parts 7 and 8 were rather lousy. So I went back and tidied them up a bit. As for the other chapters I promised, I realized that if I had made such a big mistake on editing before, I should go back and read all the other chapters as well. More parts will be posted soon.
Parts 1-12 can now been read here...
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse
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GreatSage
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#19 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 17:47
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How many parts in total are there - or is 12 the whole amount?
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tgfan92
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#20 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 18:13
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I haven't split it up, but I'm hoping no more than 15, but definitely less than 20.
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GreatSage
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#21 | Posted: 29 Oct 2009 18:27
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Cool - thanks
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tgfan92
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#22 | Posted: 1 Nov 2009 12:26
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Just leaving one final post on this thread to say that all parts of the story are now up. Anyone is welcome to read them. Feel free to comment or ask a question if you didn't understand a certain part.
All chapters can be read here...
http://takanuva12.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse
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